2024 年 12 月四级写作终极预测:应用文
2024-12-09 13:00
来源:新东方四六级网
作者:新东方四六级网
六、应用文:
Directions:
Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students' Union to
1) extend your welcome and
2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
Dear Friends,
On behalf of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University, I would like to
extend our heartfelt welcome to all of the overseas students from all over the world to study in our university.
It is my great pleasure to propose several practical suggestions to you. In the first place, life in this prestigious university perhaps is not as satisfactory as what you expected. You may be tightly bound by continual classes, excessive homework and exams. In the second place, in spite of all these adversities, you will still enjoy your life in this esteemed institution. All types of extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings
and dancing parties provide ample opportunities to make friends.
All in all, although there are many things lacking, life in our campus is a worthwhile
period in your whole lifetime. Wish you enjoy your life here!
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
参考译文:
亲爱的朋友们: 谨代表北京外国语大学学生会,我们向来我校学习的世界各地的海外学生表达衷心的欢
迎。 我们很荣幸地向你们提出一些实用的建议。首先,这所著名学府的生活也许不像你们所
期待的那么令人满意。你们可能会陷入无尽的课程、大量的作业和考试。其次,尽管有这些 课业,你们仍将享受这所大学的生活。运动会、演讲比赛、联谊会和舞会等各种各样的课外 活动提供大量交朋友的机会。
总之,尽管有很多不足,我们的校园生活仍将是你一生中一段美好的岁月。希望你享受 这里的生活!
您真诚的, 李明
亮点词汇
on behalf of 谨代表 the Students’ Union 学生会 Beijing Foreign Studies University 北京外国语 大学 would like to 想要 extend our heartfelt welcome 表达衷心的欢迎 overseas students 留学 生 propose several practical suggestions 提出一些实用的建议 in the first place 首先 prestigious university 著 名 大 学 perhaps 也 许 satisfactory 满 意 的 be tightly bound by 面 临 excessive homework 大量的作业 in the second place 其次 in spite of 尽管 esteemed institution 著名大学 extracurricular activities 课外活动 such as 例如 sports meets 运动会 speech contests 演讲比赛 social gatherings 联谊会 provide ample opportunities 提供大量的机会 make friends 交朋友 all in all 总之 worthwhile 值得的
道长点评
建议信首段应表明写作意图,简要介绍自己,注意语气,切勿啰嗦。次段应针对情况提 出具体建议或忠告,应首先肯定优点,再写需要改进,否则对方以为是投诉而非建议。尾段 应总结建议,注意礼貌原则。建议信很容易写成议论文,应时刻考虑读者感受,给对方提建 议时经常提到 I 和 you。
佳句拓展
1、I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。
2、I hope you find these proposals useful.我希望您发现这些建议有用。
3、I trust you will take my suggestions into account.我相信您会考虑我的建议。
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