2024 年 12 月四级写作终极预测:全
2024-12-09 13:05
来源:新东方四六级网
作者:新东方四六级网
一、情景作文:英语 Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about the course that impressed me most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
English is one of the required courses in all colleges and universities across the country. While quite a number of students think they are forced to take it—merely for College English Test, I study it for the purposes other than the examination itself. I should admit that English is the course that has impressed me most in college.
I cling to the idea that the practical value of English is a strong motivator. In the first
place, English adds greatly to the convenience and comfort of my life. For instance, as nearly
all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical and scientific
periodicals are in English, mastering English will facilitate my work. In the second place, a
good command of English also means chances and opportunities. With growing foreign
investment in China, English, as the language of international business, plays a vital role in
one’s career.
Over the years, it is the prospect of the usefulness of English courses that has inspired
me to study it hard. (170 words) 参考译文
英语在全国很多大学都是必修课之一。尽管相当多学生认为他们只是为了大学英语考试 而被迫上英语课,但我学习它不仅是为了考试。我应该承认英语是在大学里令我印象最深的 一门课。
我坚信英语的实用价值是一个强烈的动力。一方面,英语给我的生活极大地增加了方便 和舒适。例如,由于几乎所有互联网上的信息和超过半数世界科技期刊都是用英语写的,良 好掌握英语将使我的工作更便利。其次,好好掌握英语也意味着更多机会。随着中国外资的 不断增加,作为国际商务语言的英语将在个人职业生涯中发挥重要作用。
多年来,正是英语课实用性的前景激励我努力学习它。
亮点表达
required course 必 修 课 across the country 全 国 quite a number of 很 多 are forced to 被 迫 merely 只是 College English Test 大学英语考试 purpose 目的 other than 除......以外 examination考试 admit承认 impress令人印象深刻 clingtotheidea认为 practicalvalue实用 价值 motivator 动力 in the first place 首先 convenience 方便 comfort 舒适 for instance 例如 information 信息 the Internet 互联网 over 超过 technical 技术的 scientific 科学的 periodical 期刊 a good command of 良好掌握 facilitate 使便利 in the second place 其次 opportunity 机会 growing 越来越多的 foreign investment 外国投资 international business 国际商务 play a vital role 发挥重要作用 career 职业 over the years 多年以来 prospect 前景 usefulness 实用性 inspire 激励
佳句拓展
1、 There is a recognition that a candidate with a master’s degree will have an competitive advantage over those with only a bachelor’s degree. 普遍公认硕士学位候选人将比那些只 有学士学位的人拥有明显的优势。
2、 This is inevitable because ours is a society where one’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess. 由于我们社会中一个人的收入仍然由你所拥有的知识所决定,因 此这一点不可避免。
3、 With the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter. 随着每年毕业的大学毕业生越来越多,就业 市场的形势越来越严峻。
二、情景作文:最难忘的人
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should state the reasons write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
In my life I have met many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.
What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was
attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture was humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.
Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.
参考译文
在我生活中我遇到过很多值得回忆的人。但在我认识的人中,令我最难忘的可能要算我 的英语老师了。
让我常常回想起他的是他那些特殊的品质。首先,他教给我们一位老师所能给予的最珍 贵的东西——唤起我们学习的激情。他不仅带我们领略英语语言和文学的美,而且激起我们 在这方面深入研究的兴趣。其次,他的才智深深吸引了我。我现在还记得我们总渴望上他的 课,因为他讲课生动幽默,总能引起我们哄堂大笑。
虽然我们已有近两年没听过他的课了,但聚在一起时我们总要谈起他。我知道他的形象 已深深地留在了我心中。
亮点词汇
really确实 worth值得 recall回忆 perhaps可能 unforgettable难忘的 ever曾经 frequently常 常 brings back memory 回忆 special 特殊的 quality 品质 first of all 首先 gift 礼物 offer 给予 awaken唤起 passion激情 appreciation欣赏 beauty美 perfection完美 language语言literature 文学 arouse 激起 interest 兴趣 explore 研究 in this field 在这方面 be attracted by 被吸引 wit 才智 anticipate期待 withgreateagerness极大的渴望 lecture课程 humorously幽默地 deliver 传授 provoke 引起 chuckle 微笑 loud laugh 大笑 although 尽管 nearly 几乎 attend 参加
道长点评
四级写作已经多次考察情景作文,如:2014-12:A Course That Has Impressed You Most in College (大学里令你印象最深的一门课),2014-12:A Campus Activity That has Benefited You Most (令你最受益的一个校园活动), 2014-12:A Classmate of Yours who Has Influenced You Most in College(大学里对你影响最大的一位同学)。希望考生引起高度重视。
句型拓展
1、While quite a number of students think they are forced to take it——merely for College English Test, I study it for the purposes other than the examination itself. 尽管相当多学生认为他们只是为了大学英语考试而被迫选择英语课,但我学习是为了考试之 外的目的。
2、For instance, as nearly all information on the Internet and over half the world’s technical and scientific periodicals are in English, a good command of English will facilitate my work. 例如,由于几乎所有互联网上的信息和超过半数世界科技期刊都是英语的,良好掌握英语将 方便我的工作。
3、With growing foreign investment in China, English, as the language of international business, plays a vital role in one’s career. 随着中国外资的不断增加,作为国际商务语言的英语将在个人职业生涯中发挥重要作用。
三、情景作文:印象最深的书/电影
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a book/movie that has impressed you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
The book/movie that impressed me most in college is Around the World in Eighty Days by
Jules Verne. Jules Vern(e 1828-1905)was born in Nantes, France. He had an innate love for the sea
and for travel and adventure when he was a child. Later, he devoted himself to literature and wrote many scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.
This is a science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fog, who makes a bet with his club-mates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happened on his journey.
From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played an important role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.
参考译文
大学里我印象最深的一本书(电影)是朱尔 凡尔纳的《八十天环游地球》。朱尔 凡尔 纳出生在法国南特。在孩提时代,凡尔纳就对海洋、旅行和冒险表现出天生的热爱。后来, 他致力于文学事业,并创作了很多科幻小说——这为他赢得“现代科幻小说之父”的美名。
这是一部科幻小说(电影),讲述了一个激动人心的故事:一位叫菲莱亚斯 福格的英国 绅士和他俱乐部的伙伴打了一个赌,并设法在八十天之内环游地球。该书(电影)生动地描 述了在他旅途中遇到的很多困难和经历的一些事件。
从这个故事中,我们可以看出作者对海洋、旅行和冒险深深的热爱,这在他的一生中发 挥了重要的作用。我们也惊讶并信服于作者丰富的想象与科学、地理知识。
亮点词汇
impress 令人印象深刻 France 法国 innate 天生的 adventure 冒险 devote 奉献 literature 文学 scientific romance 科幻小说 gain 赢得 science fiction 科幻小说 exciting 激动人心的 gentleman绅士 makeabet打赌 club-mate俱乐部伙伴 manage设法 vivid生动的 description 描述 incident 事件 journey 旅途 author 作者 play an important role 发挥重要作用 astonish 惊讶 convince 信服 fertile 丰富的 imagination 想象 scientific 科学的 geographical 地理的 knowledge 知识
道长点评
本文首先可以简介作者生平、时代简介,创作的社会历史背景;主体应写故事梗 概,注意客观,内容完整、忠实原著。小说用现在时;非小说作品根据原著时态:历 史类使用过去式科普类使用现在或将来时。尾段可以提出自己的看法、评论有缺点, 讨论现在及将来影响,评论作品风格和表现手法。
句型拓展
1、 Guan Moye, better known by the pen name Mo Yan, is a Chinese novelist and short story writer who was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012 for his work as a writer "who with hallucinatory realism merges folk tales, history and the contemporary". 管谟业,以莫言的笔名广为人知,是位中国小说家和和短篇小说作家。2012 年,作为一 名作家,由于其作品“用虚幻现实主义将民间故事、历史和现代融为一体”,莫言被 授予诺贝尔文学奖。
2、 Extremely prolific, Mo Yan wrote his novel, Life and Death Are Wearing Me Out in only 42 days, which is the story of a landlord who is reincarnated in the form of various animals during the Chinese land reform movement.
非常多产的作家莫言只用 42 天就写完了小说《生死疲劳》。这是一个关于在中国 土地改革运动中间,一名地主化身为各种动物形式的小说。
3、 Using dazzling, complex, and often graphically violent images, he sets many of his stories near his hometown, northeastern Gaomi Township in Shandong Province.
莫言使用了令人眼花缭乱、复杂多变而且活灵活现的残暴形象,并把他的很多故 事都设定在他的家乡山东省高密县东北部。
四、情景作文:介绍地点
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit China,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
预测范文
I firmly believe that Xitang is the most interesting place in China. The fundamental causes are as follows.
To start with, civil residences south of the lower reaches of the Yangtze River are famous for their fresh and elegant styles and distinctive features. The ancient town of Xitang is a typical example of these dwellings. It became the place of shooting for the movie “Mission Impossible 3” acted by Tom Cruise and thus became world famous. What is more, Xitang is located in Jiaxing, Zhejiang Province, between Shanghai and Hangzhou. Though small in size, this ancient town boasts a long history. It was first built in the Spring and Autumn Period (770-476 BC), at the border between the states of Wu and Yue.
In conclusion, the residences in Xitang are built alongside the water. “Families live in the midst of waters, bridges arch over the rivers, passengers walk across the bridges, boats pass under the bridges; shops stand at the head of bridges, and their reflections sway in the water,” is how people described the village.
参考译文:
我认为西塘是中国最有意思的地方。主要原因如下。
首先,江南水乡的民居清新秀雅,极富特色。其中西塘古镇可以说是一个代表。这座古 镇因成为汤姆克鲁斯主演的《碟中谍3》的拍摄之地,而名闻世界。其次,西塘在浙江嘉兴, 位于上海和杭州之间。这个占地规模并不大的古镇有着悠久的历史,它在两千多年前的春秋 时期,就被称为“吴根越角”——吴国和越国的交界处。
更为重要的是,西塘的民居依水而建。人们说,西塘是“人家在水中,水上架小桥,桥 上行人走,小舟桥下摇。桥头立商铺,水中倒影飘”。
亮点词汇
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道长点评
2004年6月四级写作曾经考察过类似的话题,即导游词,真题如下:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a TouristAttraction. 本文应该首先指出中国最有意思的地方,然后给出两到三点原因进行支 持即可。
句型拓展
The Summer Palace lies about 20 kilometers northwest of Beijing and it consists of Longevity Hill and Kunming Lake with a total area of 290 hectares.颐和园位于北京西北大约20公里处, 由万寿山和昆明湖组成,总面积为290公顷。
The Temple of Heaven is situated in the southern part of Beijing and it was built in 1420, covering an area of 273 hectares. 天坛位于北京南部,修建于1420年,覆盖了273公顷的面 积。
Yonghegong is a famous lamasery located in the northeastern part of the old city of Beijing and it was a palatial residence built in 1694 by Qing Emperor Kangxi for his forth son, Prince Yongzheng who later succeeded to the throne.雍和宫是坐落于北京老城区东北的一座著名 的喇嘛庙,它是1694年清代皇帝康熙为他的第四个儿子、后来继承王位的雍正太子建造 的王府。
五、图画作文:合作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on teamwork. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
As is vividly depicted in the picture, wearing the same red T-shirt and yellow work card, four colleagues are standing in their office with a computer and a red cup on a desk. There is no denying that it is teamwork that makes it possible for them to achieve success in harsh reality.
Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is becoming increasingly fierce. It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.
参考译文
如图画中生动所示,四位同事穿着同样的红色体恤和黄色工牌,站在桌上放着一台电 脑和红杯子的办公室里。不可否认,正是合作才能使他们在严峻的现实中获得成功。
尽管这幅图画很简单,但它向我们表达了发人深思的含义。随着经济和社会的发展, 竞争日渐激烈。任何人都无法完全独立完成一份工作。因此,越来越多的人开始重视团队合 作。事实上,普遍公认合作的能力是想要获得成功的任何人都应该具备的最重要的素质。
因此,我们迫切需要采取措施来提高人们的合作意识。有这样我们才能获得成功,而且 只有这样社会才能变得更加和谐。
亮点词汇
vividly生动地 depict描述 wear穿着 redT-shirt红色T恤 workcard工牌 colleague同事there is no denying that 不可否认 teamwork 合作 achieve success 获得成功 harsh reality 严峻现实 convey 表达 thought-provoking 发人深思的 competition 竞争 increasingly 越来越 fierce 激烈 的 impossible 不可能的 hence 因此 people in mounting numbers 越来越多的人 put great emphasis on 重视 in fact 事实上 it has been universally acknowledged that 普遍公认 ability 能 力 essential 重要的 qualification 素质 possess 拥有 accordingly 因此 it is imperative for us to
我们必须 take some measures 采取一些措施 enhance the sense 提高意识 only in this way can we 只有这样我们才能 harmonious 和谐的
道长点评
国内写作考试中已经反复考察“人生哲理”这一话题,以六级写作为例:1993-6:My View on Opportunity(我对于机会的看法),1997-1:Haste Makes Waste(欲速则不达),2003-1: It Pays to Be Honest (诚实是值得的),2011-12:The Way to Success(成功之路),2012-12: Man and Computer(人与电脑),2012-12:On Maintaining Trust(关于保持信任),2013-6: A Smile Is the Shortest Distance Between Two Peopl(e 微笑是两个人之间最短的距离),2013-6: Good Habits Result from Resisting Temptation(好的习惯源于抵制诱惑),2013-12:The Great Use of Life Is to Spent It on Something That Will Outlast it(将生命花在比生命更长远的事上, 就是尽用生命),2013-12:Happiness Is Not the Absence of Problems, But the Ability to Deal with It(幸福并非没有问题,而是解决问题的能力)。
句型拓展
1、It is apparent that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life.
漫画作者显然是为了提醒我们合作在日常生活中的重要性。
2、Take basketball hero Yao Ming for an example, he can slam the dunk smartly because all his teammates contribute more or less to his outstanding performance. 以篮球英雄姚明为例,他能够潇洒地扣篮,是因为他的队友或多或少成就了他杰出的表现。 3、Likewise, the successful launching of Chang’e No.1 lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists’ joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment. 同样,嫦娥一号探月卫星的成功发射要归功于中国科学家们的集体努力,而不是个人成就。
六、应用文:
Directions:
Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students' Union to
1) extend your welcome and
2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
Dear Friends,
On behalf of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University, I would like to
extend our heartfelt welcome to all of the overseas students from all over the world to study in our university.
It is my great pleasure to propose several practical suggestions to you. In the first place, life in this prestigious university perhaps is not as satisfactory as what you expected. You may be tightly bound by continual classes, excessive homework and exams. In the second place, in spite of all these adversities, you will still enjoy your life in this esteemed institution. All types of extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings
and dancing parties provide ample opportunities to make friends.
All in all, although there are many things lacking, life in our campus is a worthwhile
period in your whole lifetime. Wish you enjoy your life here!
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
参考译文:
亲爱的朋友们: 谨代表北京外国语大学学生会,我们向来我校学习的世界各地的海外学生表达衷心的欢
迎。 我们很荣幸地向你们提出一些实用的建议。首先,这所著名学府的生活也许不像你们所
期待的那么令人满意。你们可能会陷入无尽的课程、大量的作业和考试。其次,尽管有这些 课业,你们仍将享受这所大学的生活。运动会、演讲比赛、联谊会和舞会等各种各样的课外 活动提供大量交朋友的机会。
总之,尽管有很多不足,我们的校园生活仍将是你一生中一段美好的岁月。希望你享受 这里的生活!
您真诚的, 李明
亮点词汇
on behalf of 谨代表 the Students’ Union 学生会 Beijing Foreign Studies University 北京外国语 大学 would like to 想要 extend our heartfelt welcome 表达衷心的欢迎 overseas students 留学 生 propose several practical suggestions 提出一些实用的建议 in the first place 首先 prestigious university 著 名 大 学 perhaps 也 许 satisfactory 满 意 的 be tightly bound by 面 临 excessive homework 大量的作业 in the second place 其次 in spite of 尽管 esteemed institution 著名大学 extracurricular activities 课外活动 such as 例如 sports meets 运动会 speech contests 演讲比赛 social gatherings 联谊会 provide ample opportunities 提供大量的机会 make friends 交朋友 all in all 总之 worthwhile 值得的
道长点评
建议信首段应表明写作意图,简要介绍自己,注意语气,切勿啰嗦。次段应针对情况提 出具体建议或忠告,应首先肯定优点,再写需要改进,否则对方以为是投诉而非建议。尾段 应总结建议,注意礼貌原则。建议信很容易写成议论文,应时刻考虑读者感受,给对方提建 议时经常提到 I 和 you。
佳句拓展
1、I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。
2、I hope you find these proposals useful.我希望您发现这些建议有用。
3、I trust you will take my suggestions into account.我相信您会考虑我的建议。
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