真题题目：
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of "The Impact of Technology on Traditional Jobs". You should express your views on how technological advancements are changing traditional job roles and the workplace, and provide examples to support your arguments. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
题目翻译：
本次写作部分，你有30分钟的时间来写一篇关于**“技术对传统工作的冲击”**的短文。你需要表达对技术进步如何改变传统工作角色和工作场所的看法，并提供支持你观点的例子。字数要求在150到200词之间。
 
范文：
Technological advancements have significantly transformed traditional job roles and the workplace. Automation and artificial intelligence are making many routine tasks more efficient, reducing the need for human labor in certain sectors. For example, in manufacturing, robots can perform repetitive tasks with high precision and speed, leading to increased productivity and cost savings for companies.
However, technology is also creating new opportunities. Jobs in fields like data analysis, cybersecurity, and software development are in high demand. These roles require a different set of skills, emphasizing creativity, problem-solving, and adaptability. For instance, data analysts use advanced tools to interpret large datasets, providing valuable insights for businesses.
In conclusion, while technology is disrupting traditional jobs, it is also paving the way for new and exciting career paths. The key is to embrace change and develop the skills needed for the digital age. This will ensure that both individuals and organizations can thrive in the future.
 
参考翻译：
技术进步显著地改变了传统的工作角色和工作场所。自动化和人工智能使许多常规任务更加高效，减少了某些行业对人力的需求。例如，在制造业中，机器人可以高精度、高速度地执行重复性任务，从而提高生产力并为公司节省成本。
然而，技术也在创造新的机会。数据分析、网络安全和软件开发等领域的职位需求旺盛。这些角色需要不同的技能，强调创造力、解决问题的能力和适应性。例如，数据分析师使用先进的工具来解释大型数据集，为商业提供有价值的见解。
总之，尽管技术正在颠覆传统工作，但它也为新的和令人兴奋的职业道路铺平了道路。关键是拥抱变化，发展数字时代所需的技能。这将确保个人和组织在未来能够蓬勃发展。
 
写作解析：
开头段落
目的：引出话题，明确表达技术对传统工作的冲击。
技巧：使用简洁的句子引出主题，例如“Technological advancements have significantly transformed traditional job roles...”。
主体段落
目的：阐述技术如何改变传统工作角色，并提供具体例子。
技巧：
使用清晰的论点开头句，如“Automation and artificial intelligence are making many routine tasks more efficient...”和“However, technology is also creating new opportunities...”。
提供具体例子，如“robots in manufacturing”和“jobs in data analysis”。
使用连接词（如“However”、“For instance”）增强段落连贯性。
结尾段落
目的：总结技术对传统工作的双重影响，并提出建议。
技巧：重述主题，使用总结性语言（如“In conclusion”），并强调适应变化的重要性。
语言表达
使用多样化的词汇和句式，避免重复。例如，使用“significantly transformed”、“high precision”、“paving the way”等高级词汇。
注意语法和拼写的准确性，避免低级错误。