2024 年 12 月四级写作终极预测:图画作文:合作
2024-12-09 13:00
来源:新东方四六级网
作者:新东方四六级网
五、图画作文:合作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on teamwork. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
预测范文
As is vividly depicted in the picture, wearing the same red T-shirt and yellow work card, four colleagues are standing in their office with a computer and a red cup on a desk. There is no denying that it is teamwork that makes it possible for them to achieve success in harsh reality.
Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is becoming increasingly fierce. It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.
参考译文
如图画中生动所示,四位同事穿着同样的红色体恤和黄色工牌,站在桌上放着一台电 脑和红杯子的办公室里。不可否认,正是合作才能使他们在严峻的现实中获得成功。
尽管这幅图画很简单,但它向我们表达了发人深思的含义。随着经济和社会的发展, 竞争日渐激烈。任何人都无法完全独立完成一份工作。因此,越来越多的人开始重视团队合 作。事实上,普遍公认合作的能力是想要获得成功的任何人都应该具备的最重要的素质。
因此,我们迫切需要采取措施来提高人们的合作意识。有这样我们才能获得成功,而且 只有这样社会才能变得更加和谐。
亮点词汇
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我们必须 take some measures 采取一些措施 enhance the sense 提高意识 only in this way can we 只有这样我们才能 harmonious 和谐的
道长点评
国内写作考试中已经反复考察“人生哲理”这一话题,以六级写作为例:1993-6:My View on Opportunity(我对于机会的看法),1997-1:Haste Makes Waste(欲速则不达),2003-1: It Pays to Be Honest (诚实是值得的),2011-12:The Way to Success(成功之路),2012-12: Man and Computer(人与电脑),2012-12:On Maintaining Trust(关于保持信任),2013-6: A Smile Is the Shortest Distance Between Two Peopl(e 微笑是两个人之间最短的距离),2013-6: Good Habits Result from Resisting Temptation(好的习惯源于抵制诱惑),2013-12:The Great Use of Life Is to Spent It on Something That Will Outlast it(将生命花在比生命更长远的事上, 就是尽用生命),2013-12:Happiness Is Not the Absence of Problems, But the Ability to Deal with It(幸福并非没有问题,而是解决问题的能力)。
句型拓展
1、It is apparent that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life.
漫画作者显然是为了提醒我们合作在日常生活中的重要性。
2、Take basketball hero Yao Ming for an example, he can slam the dunk smartly because all his teammates contribute more or less to his outstanding performance. 以篮球英雄姚明为例,他能够潇洒地扣篮,是因为他的队友或多或少成就了他杰出的表现。 3、Likewise, the successful launching of Chang’e No.1 lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists’ joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment. 同样,嫦娥一号探月卫星的成功发射要归功于中国科学家们的集体努力,而不是个人成就。
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